After all, he was a contestant who relied on writing illegal plots to attract attention!
How could he appreciate it?
Chen Sicheng coughed and felt that he had to say a few words!
"Teacher Shuping, I feel that Lu Chen's description of the clan's culture is too superficial!
Clan culture had a long history, depth, content, and a sense of heaviness!
But did you notice?
From the beginning to the end, Lu Chen only emphasized the concept of clan culture and emphasized how deeply clan culture had influenced Lin Yaodong.
However, he had never mentioned the Lin Clan's background or some family precepts.
Don't you think that writing it this way is too shallow?”
Chen Sicheng said.
The three judges looked over.
She looked at him strangely.
"Teacher Chen, it's a good thing to have high expectations, but isn't it unreasonable to have high expectations? It's only three hours of writing time, and it's unreasonable to want to do everything, right?
Moreover, Lu Chen only needed to draw out the concept of the clan.
If there was time later, he could add more content.”
Shu Ping retorted.
It was only three hours of writing time, and it was already very cramped to write a story.
What else do you expect to be flawless in?
Shuping just couldn't tell it in person. If he gave you three hours, what story could you come up with?
Perhaps it might not be as intricate as Lu Chen's story.
When Chen Sicheng heard this, he was stunned at first, then he paused and said with an embarrassed smile,"That's true. After all, time is limited.”
Seeing that Chen Sicheng did not have any hard steel, his attitude was not bad.
Shu Ping also gave him a way out.
"But Teacher Chen, what you said makes sense. As for the clan culture, if there was a chance to write a script in the future, Lu Chen really needed to think about it and add some content to it to make it as rich as possible.”
Chen Sicheng nodded.
When Liu Heping and Yan Gelin heard this, they also nodded slightly in response to the two's argument.
He turned his gaze to the big screen again…
Inside the room.
When Lu Chen finished writing, he stopped writing again.
He stood in front of the whiteboard and thought quietly for a while.
This scene in the ancestral hall.
Lu Chen felt that there was a need to highlight it.
After all, Lin Yaodong's ultimate goal was not only to lead the pagoda village.
The conversation with Zhao Jialiang on the rooftop.
Lin Yaodong clearly pointed out that his highest personal dream was to repair the most luxurious, largest, and most gorgeous Lin family ancestral hall.
It could be said that Lin Yaodong had prepared for at least ten years for this goal!
On the eve of the implementation of the plan!
Poison Village was destroyed!
Presumably, this had become Lin Yaodong's lifelong regret.
In the TV series, the Lin family's ancestral hall was not only an important filming location.
In the series, there were many scenes of Lin Yaodong quietly looking up at the ancestral hall...
So...
Lu Chen felt that he needed to focus on the ancestral hall.
He explained the ancestral hall clearly and exaggerated it sufficiently.
It was also beneficial for the audience to understand the Lin Clan.
Coincidentally, there was a very detailed description of the Lin family's ancestral hall in the original drama…
Thinking of this…
Lu Chen took a deep breath and continued writing.
"If leading the pagoda village to rise is Lin Yaodong's spiritual goal!
Then, building a small temple and repairing the Lin family's temple were Lin Yaodong's material goals.
It was not difficult for Lin Yaodong to build a small temple.
As a member of this house, as long as you have money, you can repair it whenever you want!
However, repairing the Lin Clan's ancestral temple was not that easy!
It had to be a person of high moral standing and a well-off family background to do it.
With Lin Yaodong's strength at that time, he did not have these two points.
Therefore, repairing the temple had become a lofty goal buried in Lin Yaodong's heart after he gradually developed!
(Here, I feel that I need to arrange a background history for the Lin family's ancestors to highlight the Lin family's heritage and the historical and cultural background of Tazhai Village.）”
Lu Chen specially marked it in parenthesis.
Firstly, it was to show his own creative journey and direction of thinking!
To ensure that the creation on the spot was more "authentic"!
Secondly, Lu Chen also had to lay a reasonable foundation for the background of the Lin family's genealogy.
Lu Chen held a pen and paced back and forth in the room.
In the judges 'room.
She saw Lu Chen write this sentence.
Yan Gelin laughed on the spot." Speak of the devil. We were just discussing the unclear concept of clans. Lu Chen planned to add some content to the Lin family.”
Shu Ping immediately turned to look at Chen Sicheng and said with a smile,"Teacher Chen, it seems like you're asking a question too early. Lu Chen has obviously already considered the problem you've thought of.”
Chen Sicheng's smile was a little stiff. He didn't know whether to say it or not.
He could only force a smile and brush it off.
He thought to himself,'I've really seen a ghost. I just raised a question, and Lu Chen already considered it?'
…………
Lu Chen paced back and forth in the room more than ten times.
He suddenly stopped.
A look of realization appeared on his face.
Then, he hurriedly ran to the whiteboard and wrote a paragraph.
An answer so soon?
The judges and netizens all looked over, wanting to know what Lu Chen would write.
The lines of text were as follows:
"According to the ancestral records, in the fourth year of Jiatai of the Southern Song Dynasty, Shi Yinggong moved here from Anxi, the Fortune Sword. He bought land and built a thatched hut here to settle down.
Later, when his children became rich, they changed the straw shed into an ancestral hall. This was the first time in history that the Lin family's ancestral hall was built.
Later, during the Jiaqing period of Qianlong, thanks to the development of the sugar industry and the prosperity of Jiazi Port, the Lin clan repaired the Lin clan's ancestral hall for the second time.
During the period of the Republic of China, when the war was in chaos, the military ruffians became popular, and the clan forces that protected the peace of the region grew stronger! The Lin Clan's strength had once reached its peak. The renovated Lin Clan's ancestral hall was also magnificent and extraordinary.”
? Whoosh!
After reading this description.
Liu He Ping, Shu Ping, and the others felt their hearts thump!
Even a historical drama giant like Liu Heping!
When he saw this description, his eyes lit up!
Shuping and Yan Gelin couldn't help but nod and praise him.
"This description is vigorous and profound! It's quite well written!"
"Crossing three periods of history, his style is fresh and concise. I didn't expect Lu Chen to have the potential to write a historical drama. Teacher Liu, what do you think?”
Yan Gelin looked at Liu Heping.
The latter smiled slightly and nodded." This background is not bad. It echoes the two main topics of clan culture and ancestral hall culture. It has depth, history, and breadth. It's an impromptu performance. It's worthy of recognition!”
Seeing that the three judges had given him high praise.
Chen Sicheng's face turned even redder.
There was only one word in his heart, F * ck!
He didn't expect Number 48 to be so capable!
He peeked at the words again.
He discovered…
If he was the one writing this, he probably wouldn't be able to write it…
…………
Even the judges were like this.
The live broadcast room was naturally even more explosive!
Damn, I didn't expect the Lin family's ancestors to be able to trace back to the Southern Song Dynasty! This description was too touching!
Could this be the strength of the first place in the regional competition? Awesome! Sound breaking!
With this description alone, Number 48 could become a god! He would definitely advance to the next round!
He did not expect that during the Republic of China, the Lin family's ancestors were still a local aristocratic family. They could actually protect the peace of a region! Amazing!
With such a historical background, it was no wonder that the pagoda village's clan culture was so rich.
With this background, I can understand more and more that Lin Yaodong wants to lead the pagoda village to rise. This is not a rise, this is clearly a revival!
Doing illegal things just to repair the ancestral hall. Previously, I thought that this was too melodramatic, but now it seems that I was too shallow!
Brother Dong was too down-to-earth! A person who wanted to lead his clansmen to rise up and build the ancestral hall, what bad intentions could he have?
She suddenly felt that Lin Yaodong was so cute! He was working hard to earn money just to obtain the right to repair the Lin family's ancestral hall! Number 48 was awesome! Was this plot really thought up on the spot? The awesome pen exploded!
This plot was indeed amazing! It made one's scalp go numb!
Looking forward to it, looking forward to the next plot!!!!!
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