"Teacher Chen, you said that the first reason you gave six points was because the story was not complete enough!
Then let me ask you, what exactly is considered complete?!
Come, come, come. Director team, bring up the scene from Lu Chen's live broadcast room and project it on the screen!”
Yan Gelin was domineering!
Soon, the scene from Lu Chen's livestream was projected onto the big screen.
The first thing that entered the eyes of the contestants were the three whiteboards, densely packed with words!
"D * mn, he wrote so much!"
"I only wrote on a whiteboard."
The contestants were all stunned!
Yan Gelin pointed at the image on the screen and said,""Teacher Chen, take a look at this story for yourself. Which part of it isn't complete?
The villain, Lin Yaodong, the third branch of the pagoda, the Haoyu Group, and the secret umbrella.
Li Weimin, Li Fei, Zhao Jialiang.
The three of them drew out two lines and attacked Lin Yaodong together!
Look at these fifteen episodes. The logic is clear, the main plot is clear, and the characters are well-arranged!
It could be said that this story had characters and plots!
There must be an intention! It had to be meaningful!
Yet you said that such a story was not complete?!”
"Teacher Yan, I…"
"Let me finish first!"
Yan Gelin interrupted Chen Sicheng again.
"Then, let's talk about the second reason!
You said that this drama is off topic?
I seem to remember that you said at the beginning of the program that if you were the one writing, you might write about the theme of the rural war.
Think about it yourself. You've already combined the two elements of the village and the war of resistance. Why should Lu Chen's writing about the village's anti-drug campaign be a digress?
Besides, the story was designed so clearly!
They wanted to destroy this poison village!
Was Poison Village not a village anymore?
How did it go off topic?
At this point.
I have to say, the issue of assimilation is serious.
We have repeatedly emphasized this problem during the game.
After this round, we realized that too many contestants chose the same theme.
It resulted in the same plot, design, and central idea?
Do you think this is a good thing?
Also, you keep talking about the program rules. Let me ask you!
What was the ultimate goal of this competition?
Was it to write the eight-part essay?
Or was it to cultivate writing formulas?？
Isn't our real goal to dig out good stories?
In order to let more outstanding screenwriters enter the public eye?!
I believe that this is the true intention of this show!
It's not the rules that you keep saying!!”
Yan Gelin's voice shook the hall!
The veins on his face were bulging!
It couldn't help but make people moved and look sideways!
"It just so happens that this point of view can also answer your last point-program creation!
What did he mean by relying on creating a minefield to attract people's attention?
You've said this more than once during the live broadcast.
I refuted you before, and I'm going to refute you now!
I admit that Lu Chen's story was indeed eye-catching in the beginning!
That's because we don't understand his story!
Because they didn't understand each other, there was a misunderstanding!
However!
This was the process of creation!
Look at these white boards.
How did he deduce the core of his story?
I, I, Teacher Shuping, Teacher Liu Heping!
Including the majority of netizens, they were all watching with their own eyes!
Don't tell me that as a judge, you don't even know how to deduce a story?!
He kept talking about rules and regulations!
There were so many rules!
I'll say it today!
I'm here to be a judge!
He wanted to see a good story!
He saw an outstanding screenwriter talent!
As long as the creation of this story was reasonable and legal!
It met the requirements!
Then I think everything that happened in between is secondary!
As for your so-called commercial value!
I won't comment on this.
After all, I'm just a screenwriter, unlike you, a multi-billion-dollar director!
However, I personally don't agree with any of the first three points you mentioned!
In fact, I even feel that these three conditions of yours are completely nonsense!”
"Well said!"
Behind him…
When Yan Gelin said this!
Shu Ping applauded enthusiastically on the spot!
Even Liu Heping clapped slightly to express his attitude!
He saw the two Great Teachers clapping.
The contestants were stunned.
They also started clapping in twos and threes!
In the end, it turned into a wave of applause!
In the live broadcast room.
Countless netizens went crazy at this moment. They were in tears!
Teacher Yan is attracting too many fans!
She was crying! Teacher Yan is too tough!
It felt so good. He slapped his face in front of Chen Sicheng! I love Teacher Yan!
I'm cheering for Teacher Yan!
Thank you, Teacher Yan, for speaking up for justice and clearing Lu Chenju's name!
…………
On the stage.
Little Sa was also dumbfounded!
They never expected that the two teachers would actually openly fight on stage for Lu Chen!
This…
Little Sa's heart was filled with twists and turns!
Of course, Chen Sicheng's comments were unexpected.
However, Yan Gelin's domineering attack was even more unexpected!
Look at this situation!
If nothing unexpected happened.
Today, Douyin, Weibo, and other major social media headlines were likely to be dominated by "Next Pen"!
…………
At this moment, the person with the worst expression was undoubtedly Chen Sicheng!
He never expected Yan Gelin to openly oppose him during his commentary segment!
More importantly, he was so "arrogant"!
Instantly.
Chen Sicheng's expression darkened as he felt that he had been seriously offended.
"Teacher Yan, have you said enough? Can you let me say a few words?”
Yan Gelin didn't say anything, indicating that he agreed.
"You can disagree with my opinion, but I don't think you have the right to interfere with my grading!" Chen Sicheng snorted coldly.”
"You're wrong, Teacher Chen. I didn't interfere with your grading, nor did I intend to interfere.
It doesn't matter if you give me six points or five points. Even if you give me zero points today, I will never interfere with you.
But I want to remind you!
Although you have the right to give marks!
But as judges, we have the right to supervise each other.
If what you said today is right!
I definitely won't stand up and refute any of your words!
But your comments are too ridiculous!
I think it's my duty to make some comments on your speech!”
"Giving six points is my evaluation!”
"Alright, then continue to maintain your point of view. I don't want you to change your score.
However, you can't deprive me of my right to express my opinion on your words!”
"You!"
Chen Sicheng's chest heaved up and down violently!
"Alright! I won't refute you! But don't worry, I won't be affected by you! My evaluation of contestant Lu Chen is completely sincere! If he's willing to listen, he'll listen. If he's not willing to listen, I won't force him!”
"Come on, I think it's better not to listen to your opinion!”
Yan Gelin was too valiant!
He said whatever he was thinking!
She changed the topic and suddenly looked at Lu Chen below the stage.
"Lu Chen!"
"Yes, Teacher Yan!"
"Don't let someone's comments affect your confidence and judgment!
At the very least, I, Teacher Shuping, and Teacher Liu Heping all approve of your writing style!
I hope you can give it your all in the next round of the Top 16!
Write a better story!
After all, a screenwriter's best weapon was his story!
You have to use your story to shut the mouths of those who doubt you!
Did you hear that?"
"Yes, Teacher Yan!"
Below the stage, Lu Chen nodded heavily and bowed to express his gratitude!
Facing Yan Gelin, he did not care about his face and image, but he still had to speak up for himself!
Lu Chen was naturally very grateful!
In the next round of the ranking competition, he was prepared to give it his all and win the first place in the next round!
Otherwise, he would have let down Yan Gelin, Shuping, and Teacher Liu Heping…
The public support for him today!
"Alright, good luck! I think highly of you!"
After saying that, Yan Gelin ignored Chen Sicheng and stuffed the microphone into Little Sa's arms before returning to the team.
Chen Sicheng's face was as dark as water, and he was on the verge of losing control!
However, for the sake of the live broadcast on the internet.
He suppressed his anger and returned to the team without a word.
Looking at the awkward atmosphere, Little Sa was under a lot of pressure!
Helpless, he could only use all his strength to mediate!
"Everyone! Although the discussion between the two judges was very intense!
But I believe that they are all responsible for the players and the competition, and they express their personal opinions.
As a player, I think everyone should be glad!
Fortunately, the judges were so responsible!
Here…
Please let us give our two teachers a round of applause!”
Little Sa took the lead in clapping!
Below the stage, applause erupted!
Seeing that the atmosphere was finally a little better.
Little Sa didn't dare to delay and went straight to the point."
"Next, I will officially announce Contestant Lu Chen's final score for this round.
His online rating was 8.4.
The judges 'scores: 9 points, 9 points, 10 points, 6 points. Overall score: 8.5 points.
Therefore, Contestant Lu Chen's final score was: 8.45 points!"
Another round of applause…
"At this point, the top 32 of this round have all been born!
Next, please look at the big screen!"
On the screen.
Ranked according to results, the top 32 were officially arranged!
What was unexpected was that Lu Chen was actually ranked fourth!
I was so angry that I laughed. The most popular work of this round, which set many records, was only ranked fourth! Who would believe this, my family!
He was indeed off the mark. He actually didn't even enter the top three!
The scumbag Chen had destroyed a perfect result with his own hands!!
Don't worry, there will definitely be a lot of people scolding Chen Sicheng on the trending searches tonight!
There was no point in scolding them, they were judges!
The Internet would put pressure on him!
I really want to beat up Act Tough Wang Chen! He was jealous of Lu Chen, jealous!
Jealous? He couldn't be so narcissistic, could he? He was a multi-billion-dollar director! What does your Lu Chen have?
Hehe, don't be sarcastic! They were only in the top 32 now. There was still a long way to go!
Stop pretending. If he's really that awesome, why don't you write a film about Detective Tang? Or maybe Beihai.
Don't worry," Ice Breaker " is definitely better than your scumbag Chen's " Northern Love "! I'll say it now!
Haha, I'm dying of laughter! Who doesn't know how to act?
That's right, if they were eliminated in the round of sixteen, it would be a joke!
In the live broadcast room.
Lu Chen's fans and Chen Sicheng's fans unexpectedly started fighting!
The two sides were engaged in a war of words!
But in the end, it was still because of Lu Chen's huge number of fans!
Chen Sicheng was forced to retreat.
…………
As the top 32 names were announced!
This round of the competition officially came to an end!
Little Sa stood in the middle of the stage!
"Ladies and gentlemen, this round of the competition is over!
Ten days later, we will begin the second round, the Top 16 Advancement Competition!
Everyone can take some time to follow the funny voice and Weibo account of the "Godly Pen Contest"!
Find out about the latest developments in the show!
Finally, I would like to thank everyone for nearly five hours of company!
Ladies and gentlemen, let's meet again in 10 days for 'The Next Brush'!”
After Saa announced the time of the next round!
The match had officially ended!
The contestants and judges left the hall one after another.
The live broadcast also stopped ~
…………
Ten minutes later!
In the executive director's office.
"Dong dong dong!"
"Come in!"
"Director, you were looking for me?"
Lu Chen pushed the door open and entered, looking confused.
After the competition, Lu Chen was like the other contestants, preparing to pack up and go home.
Unexpectedly, the staff told him.
The executive director, Hong Tao, wanted to see him.
Hence, Lu Chen came.
"Come, come, come. Sit, sit."
Hong Tao pointed at the stool in front of him.
Lu Chen sat down.
Hong Tao didn't know whether to laugh or cry. He poured out his grievances."Lu Chen, I asked you to write about the countryside. What the hell is this pagoda village of yours?”
Lu Chen was speechless.
"Director, anti-drug operations in the countryside are still in the countryside.!”
"Alright, alright, I'm just complaining.”
"Actually, I called you here because I wanted to discuss with you about the collective bidding meeting tomorrow afternoon at two o'clock."”
"Group bidding? Tomorrow afternoon?"
"Why? Is there something you need?" Hong Tao asked.
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