Sun Wukong traveled through time and space to play online games

I’m writing a new novel that’s a combination of anime, online games, and fantasy. I’m not a veteran yet, so I hope everyone can help me with some of the things I’m not good at. Let’s work together to complete my work. I accept any suggestions, but I hope that you won’t scold me. Good works are created through discussion, not scolding. I hope everyone can help me