This was the first novel that I had mustered up the courage to write and put online. What seemed perfect in my eyes was full of flaws in the eyes of the readers. Regarding this, the author could only smile bitterly and apologize to all readers. He had written blindly without reading the original work carefully, causing the novel to look a little broken and a little naive. If one day he could not withstand the overwhelming condemnation…he would silently castrate himself.
The BUG in this chapter could not be covered up from the perspective of the narrator in the main text, so he could only open this chapter and forcefully add these settings. It could be considered as making up for the lost sheep.
Firstly, there was the problem of the male protagonist's eyes and physique. If it wasn't for the Uchiha clan, they wouldn't be able to freely open and close the Shura Eye. With reference to Kakashi and Tanzo, they could only cover their eyes. Some people said that Ye Yi was not the author's biological son and had been abused time and time again in the novel. Regarding this point, the author should treat his biological son like his own son! He forcefully added this setting to this chapter.
" For reference, people who are not of the Uchiha clan will not be able to turn off the Shurun Eye unless they obtain the Wood Escape Cell. Even if they fuse with Uchiha's blood, they will go dark after activating the kaleidoscope, which is to say, blindness. Only the Wood Escape Cell and the evolution into the Eternal Kaleidoscope can prevent blindness. And the Shurun Eye is actually filled with longing and feelings?" This is too funny. Only hatred can be used to open your eyes. You don't look at it seriously and just write nonsense. Do you have to be so stupid? I really can't stand it anymore. Please respect the actual situation and setting of the original work.
Bug fix:
Wood Evasion Cell. Ye Yi could not withstand the pain of blood transfusion and almost died, so Ye Yi had to be implanted with interpillar cells.
The problem with Eye Opening: The Shura Eye opened its eyes because it was filled with longing and emotions. This was the same. Because of longing, it was filled with hatred. Hatred imprisoned Ye Yi's ninja world, so it opened its eyes.
Bug2: Uchiha Weasel
" Please, Haruko Yamanaka is already 15 or 16 years old this year, and Itachi is only 13 years old. I really don't think Uchiha Itachi is an easy person to get close to. They've only known each other for a short time, right?" He had that stoic expression on his face when he was with his parents. He was probably only gentler to Sasuke and Zhishui. This was too much of a Mary Sue.
[Bug fix: Does Uchiha Itachi really look thirteen when he's thirteen?] Was that wisdom something an ordinary person could have? Was that charm something that ordinary people could have? And this charm of Uchiha Weasel was the reason why An Qing, a fan of the movie, was so obsessed with Uchiha Weasel. This explanation seemed a little far-fetched. However, the author hadn't decided yet, so he decided to leave it at that for now.
[Bug3: Mary Sue, Haruko Yamanaka]
Haruko Yamanaka's talent was too heaven-defying. The third generation Naruto could use five ninjutsu attributes, while An Qing was only able to use four attributes under the third generation Naruto! He could even activate Immortal Mode? The answer was in the first chapter. There was actually a foreshadowing. During a certain period of time when Ye Yi was unconscious, An Qing and the black shadow reached an agreement. The black shadow believed that Ye Yi was not so easy to tame and wanted to use the relationship between An Qing and Ye Yi in the present world (classmate and crush) to bind Ye Yi. That was why he gave An Qing a good physique. However, he only found a random corpse in the Ninja Realm and stuffed Ye Yi's soul into it.
He randomly found a corpse…Hmm, this corpse could be forcefully added with such a setting. It was a distant relative of the Uchiha clan. Otherwise, Yuichi would not look like Uchiha Izuna. Otherwise, it would be impossible for him to successfully fuse with Uchiha's blood.
The first few chapters did have a little bit of Mary Sue's aura, but I've been walking the path of torturing the master!! T_T
Let's stop here for now. We'll slowly sort it out in the future.。。I'll humbly accept any valuable suggestions from readers! After all, this was the maiden novel of Heart Lock, and she didn't want him to become a white paper for no reason.
[Note: I stopped updating for a few days. While I was being ridiculed, my inspiration seemed to have been wiped out.]
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