The Great Strategy of the Two-Dimensional World
14 The most important part of the story is indeed the ups and downs, and so are the comics.

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Everyone in the class saw this scene and was stunned without exception. Even Little Liu herself was a little stunned. What was going on?

Even if he didn't have common sense, he wouldn't have chosen to sit on him.

Although this was indeed a good choice, it was still in class. It was inevitable that it would be inappropriate for Mashiro to sit on him. Even if Xiaoliu was willing, that old-fashioned Mr. Koizumi would not agree.

Koizumi recovered from her shock. For a moment, she did not know what to say. However, the current situation could not continue like this.

"Shiina, sitting on someone else's body in class and sharing a desk is not a rule in this school.”Koizumi said helplessly.

"Is that so?" Shiina acted as if she didn't know about this rule.

"Yes, that's it. Please find another seat to sit down.”Koizumi nodded.

Mashiro furrowed her brows and seemed a little unhappy. She turned to look at Sato.

Sato was excited. Could it be that this mysterious transfer student was going to sit on him? This development seemed to be a little too fast? However, he soon heard Mashiro's words.

"I want to sit here. Can he sit in the back?”

"Hmm…Sato, what do you think?”Koizumi said helplessly. She was really impressed by this transfer student. He was so stubborn.

Hidekazu felt extremely awkward when he heard this. The students around him all looked over. He could only laugh dryly and leave his seat to Mashiro.

Mashiro sat down beside Koyanagi and smiled at her.

" Alright, let's start the class. Open your textbooks. What we're going to talk about in this class is…" Koizumi shook his head and opened the books as he said casually.

However, after what had just happened, both Xiaoliu and Mashiro had suddenly become the focus of everyone's attention. For a moment, everyone did not return to their senses and focused on class.

Koizumi naturally noticed this. She clapped her hands and said,""Stop daydreaming. Your tuition fees are not cheap, right? Quickly come back to your senses and focus on class!”

Only then did many students come back to their senses. They all knew that if they continued to be in a daze, Koizumi would definitely go berserk. At that time, everyone would suffer.

As the class continued, the bell for the end of the class soon rang. Mashiro was surrounded by a few girls who came over to greet him, while the boys ran over to Koyanagi to ask about his relationship with Mashiro.

It wasn't until school ended that Xiaoliu heaved a sigh of relief and pulled Mashiro back to Cherry Blossom Manor.

Although the day was different from usual, Little Liu still liked the feeling.

Mashiro's hand was held by Koyanagi as they walked slowly, as if she was thinking about something.

When they returned to Cherry Blossom Manor, Mashiro raised his head and said,""Little Liu-kun…I have something I want to show you.”

"What?" Little Liu asked.

"It's that…comic. Can you help me take a look?”Mashiro asked.

"Of course you can." Little Liu nodded.

Then, Little Liu went to Mashiro's room.

Sitting on the chair, Xiaoliu looked at the original manga drawn by Mashiro.

Mashiro stood at the side, slightly nervous.

Little Liu looked at the manga carefully. It was a love manga for young girls. The style was very good, and the details were handled very well. For a newcomer, it was quite rare.

Painting style, character, angle, body proportion, environment proportion, style, background arrangement, softness of lines, and so on.

These were all things that a manga had to do. For some newcomers, it could be said to be very difficult to complete. The manga in Xiaoliu's hands was unexpectedly well completed. It was even better than some of the newcomers who had debuted.

After reading it carefully, Xiao Liu couldn't help but frown. The manga didn't have any lines. It was a dry and tasteless plot.

Although the style was good, it was not enough to hide the dry and tasteless plot. It was best to describe it as empty.

The story was plain and uninteresting, almost baffling. There was no theme, no center, no ups and downs, no fluctuations. It could be said to be extremely simple.

"Although there are no lines and it is indeed a good starting point, you obviously don't know how to make use of it. Moreover, it ended so quickly.”Little Liu raised her head and said seriously.

"It's not considered a comic?" Mashiro was stunned for a moment before asking.

" Yes, meeting, dating, and then being together-this is the theme of your manga, but it can't end with just this.”Little Liu thought for a moment and said seriously.

"What should I do?" Mashiro asked seriously.

"The ups and downs-the most important thing in a story is the ups and downs. Only with ups and downs can one feel something. Your story is so dull and empty that no matter how good the style is, it won't change it.”" Let me give you an example," Xiao Liu said seriously." The method of change is very simple. It is to make their encounter and confession bumpy. Even if they end up together, it will be the same. There will be all kinds of accidents. It is very routine, but it is also very effective.”

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