As he was thinking, Ying Yingying frowned and said,
"Big Brother, why do you have to write women so bad? It's so hard for us women to find a man. How can we break off the engagement? Your idea was unreasonable from the start. There's no way you're going to break off the engagement. Also, don't write that women are bad guys! We women live such a tiring life, and you still want to rub salt into a woman's wound. Definitely not!”
Uh, she actually said that it definitely wouldn't work? However, what he said seemed to make sense ~
However, if this plot was changed, it would be difficult to connect the following plots, and the novel would be completely ruined.
Since he couldn't copy this novel, he could only choose something else. But who should he find? Mortal? This book didn't break off the engagement, and it was well written. The female lead wasn't the kind who had a deep hatred. After thinking for a while, Lin Yuanju decided to copy this book.
Soon, Lin Genju copied and pasted more than ten chapters and showed them to Ying Yingying for her reference.
Ying Yingying looked at it for a while and said,
"It's alright, but what is this book about? It's just a small bottle. The female lead has so few scenes. Who wants to read such a book? Also, wasn't this protagonist too feminine? He was so strong. There was no such strong man in reality.”
'Old Demon Han is feminine. I wonder if he'll beat you to death…'
"I'm writing about a male protagonist, a male chauvinistic world, understand?”
"Male world?"
It was Ying Yingying's first time hearing this term. She thought for a while before she understood. She hugged Lin Genju and kissed him. She giggled and said,
"A male chauvinistic society? The men dominated everything, and the women were in a dominant position, right?”
" Yes, just like now. Men have to work hard, earn money to buy houses and cars, and rack their brains to please and pursue girls…"
Before Ling Junju could finish his sentence, Ying Yingying burst into laughter.
"Hahaha…I'm dying of laughter…Hahaha…Men earn money to support their families! Can they carry bags? Can you do manual labor? I've only seen women working as porters in logistics companies. I've only seen women building walls and repairing roads and bridges. I've never seen a man working in such a place.”
"Big Brother, don't tell me that men can do this kind of work. Do they have the strength? However, the idea of a male chauvinistic society was very novel. He could try to write about it. It would definitely be very funny!”
Lin Genju didn't know what expression he should have. In a male society, weren't those things done by men? Especially in the logistics and construction industries, most of them were done by men, okay?
However, Lin Genju didn't want to reveal his background to her, so he changed the topic."
"Is there anything else that I need to pay attention to in this novel?”
"Why isn't there a plot where a man and a woman sleep together? It's been more than ten chapters and they haven't kissed yet. Are you writing a one-sex novel?”
A plot where a man and a woman slept together? Are you sure it won't be banned immediately? You have to know that this is Xiao Huang (Wen), the editor will teach you a lesson in minutes!
"Do I have to write the specific plot when I'm sleeping? This was a erotic novel! Would it be alright to write Huang Ce's novel? Why was there so little description of this?”
"You're watching a male channel, and the first few chapters were already about the death from the poison. Also, it wasn't that they didn't want to write about it, but it was that the male channel was particular about being reserved. From the beginning, the male lead had been exposed and no one liked him. "If you don't write it, you might not pass the review. Many of the authors I've been following said that they hate writing about this kind of plot, but the editor said that without a specific description of the actions of love, your book will be banned.”
Hearing Ying Yingying's analysis, Lin Genju was speechless.
In the original time and space, they would check the novels once a year. Whoever turned yellow would be guaranteed to receive 108 seals! In a woman's society, not only were they forbidden, but they also had to write it down. Even if they didn't write it down, they would still have to seal it with 108 seals!
My brain is already not enough! He actually wanted people to write erotic novels! He wondered if the authors of the novels who were banned in the original time and space would kneel down and beat the ground, shouting that the heavens were unfair.
After thinking for a while, Lin Geju began to look for descriptions of this in the book. Unfortunately, what he found was only a brief description and not specific.
But it doesn't matter. I can add more scenes and add more ingredients to those plots that were briefly mentioned. I'm definitely good at this!
Thinking about it, Lin Geju began to add specific descriptions of men and women into the novel. In order not to change the structure of the original work, he wrote about passersby and did not add anything about the main character. This way, the plot structure of the novel would not be affected.
After he showed Ying Yingying the picture again, Lin Genju hugged her. When he was writing those plots, he was about to explode! Now that the beautiful Ying Yingying was lying beside him and didn't mind at all, how could he hold it in?
He gently placed his hand on her big mountain and gently opened and closed his fingers. His speed was neither fast nor slow. Ruan, soft, cunning…After a few moments, Ying Yingying looked at him with a pair of eyes and then covered his palm and asked,
"Is it big? Do you like it?"
"Da…Yingying, I like it so much! But I don't want to be separated by clothes, can I?”
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