"To highlight the character's personality, what should I do?”
"I still have to do some background support, but didn't I mention the background in the first volume of 'Love Metronometer'?”
"Changing the plot, the twist is a little far-fetched. How do we change this?"
Shika Kasumigaoka, who was in class, looked at the email sent by the editor and frowned.
Although her first volume of " Love Metronome " was very popular, the sales volume plummeted when the second volume was released. She could not find the reason at all.
After asking the editor, the other party gave these problems. The character's personality was not outstanding, the background was not good enough, and the plot was not smooth enough.
She couldn't find the correct way to fix these problems.
"What should I do?" Shika Kasumigaoka pouted and mumbled to herself. She leaned on the table helplessly, showing no interest in the math class taught by the bald middle-aged teacher.
" Do you need my help?" Aoki Eichi handed over a small note. Although he really wanted to listen to this familiar yet unfamiliar math class, he had no choice but to take action because of the little boy's mission.
" Eh?" Shika Kasumigaoka was a little stunned when she saw the note in front of her." Aoki-san, do you have any unique views on writing novels?"" She held a pen and wrote a reply on the note.
"I don't have a unique opinion, but I still have my own opinions.”Aoki Eichi copied his previous life's experience of writing novels. "The initial setting of a character is just a rough skeleton. If you want this character to have flesh and blood, you have to use some plot to enrich it.”
"For example, if you want to say that a girl is kind, write a story about her adopting a poor stray cat on the roadside. In this way, it was easy to highlight a character's kind personality. Even if you didn't say that she was kind, the readers would subconsciously think that this character had a kind personality.”
"Aoki-kun, your insight is really amazing!" Looking at the detailed and simple explanation on the note, Shiyu Kasumigaoka felt as if she had obtained a treasure. Now, it was as if she had opened a new door to writing, and her thoughts flowed like a fountain.
She didn't even notice that the way she addressed Aoki-san had changed from 'Aoki-san' to 'Aoki-kun' now.
Even her editor, Natsume, had never seen these things before. She couldn't even see the root cause of the decline in the sales of her second volume at first. It was only after reading her work several times that she managed to point out these problems.
Aoki Emi, who was sitting next to him, did not even know what novel he was writing, but she pointed out the key point.
Could he be some hidden senior novelist?
Shiyu Kasumigaoka carefully folded the note and kept it, preparing to use it as her future writing Bible.
"It's nothing. I just wrote some essays when I was bored in the past. Although I didn't publish them, I still have some understanding of novels." This method was used by almost all novelists in his previous life, but he didn't expect that this world didn't even know about this writing method.
It seemed that Su Yi... It should be Aoki Sawaichi's previous suggestion that was very practical. It seemed like a good choice to quietly be a novelist or manga artist.
"I didn't expect Aoki-kun to have such a special understanding of writing at such a young age. If I had asked Aoki-kun for help earlier, I wouldn't have been so miserable for so many days.”
" After I change my novel, Aoki-kun must accept my invitation to thank me. Otherwise, I'll feel uneasy.”She said gratefully as she took out her phone and prepared to type.
"I'm very sorry. Although I really want to thank Aoki-kun, I'm pressed for time. I have to start working on my manuscript." The girl playfully shook the phone in her hand and whispered.
Her eyes curved, and the word 'sorry' was written all over her fair face.
There were only a few days left before the deadline. If she could not produce a work that satisfied the editor within these few days, the series of " Love Metronome " might be cut in half and there would be no follow-up.
Aoki Emi nodded in understanding and handed over a piece of paper. "It's okay. Just don't forget to treat me to dinner after you finish writing.”
Soon, the girl pushed the note back." Alright, alright. I'll definitely thank Aoki-kun in person."”A cute smiley face followed behind.
"Mission completed. Beginning calculation. Completion level: S. Reward: 1 mission point has been issued.”The mission notification sounded again, followed by Aoki Sawaichi.
"Congratulations on completing another mission.”
She reappeared in the corridor of the classroom. This time, she wasn't floating in the air. Instead, she was sitting on a stool that had been brought over from somewhere and eating ice cream in her hand with a relaxed expression.
"Are you planning to listen to the class with me?”He looked at Aoki Sawaichi, who was looking at the blackboard, and asked with a smile.
"Of course not. Shouldn't this level of course be very easy for me and my brother?" The girl shook her head and smiled contemptuously at the formula.
Although Aoki Huiichi was still a high school freshman when he entered the reincarnation space, in order to disguise his identity in all kinds of dungeons, he had learned almost all the knowledge. Coupled with the strong memory brought by the bloodline enhancement, even now, he did not forget a single thing.
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