At the mention of her own work, Asami's focus shifted. She crossed her arms in front of her." You know literature? I don't think you've even read The Old Man and the Sea.”
"Image, image, your elegant image just now is gone.”
Sagawa Yan realized that he liked to tease this Asami-senpai. Perhaps it was because she was too dignified and elegant that he couldn't help but want to see what was behind her elegance.
"You!"
Asami Uchida panted again.
Zuochuan Yan knew that he had to take out something real. Otherwise, the girl in front of him might really leave without a care.
Although the Academic Genius System looked down on literature and social studies, there were still some. With his level 0 literature and his knowledge from his previous life, it was more than enough to teach the girl in front of him.
"You've read all the works of Hugo, Dante, and Goethe? Let me, a math student, tell you the problem in your work.”
Sagawa Yan repeated the words 'mathematics department'.
"First of all, you didn't figure out the position of your work. It's fine for you to imitate everyone in your words, but you tried to add Master Kawabata Yasunari's style while imitating Master Haruki Murakami. In the end, it became a complete mess.”
" If you want to write a critical piece of serious literature, but write a handsome male and beautiful female protagonist to please young readers, you will only end up with neither.”
Asami was provoked by this merciless criticism, but she had to admit that he was right. Her usual works were often praised by everyone, so she did not think of this problem at all.
Just like his lemon pie, he was once again pointed out by someone without any courtesy. But compared to Kudo, this guy was much more despicable!
She gritted her teeth in hatred, but at the same time, she wanted to hear him continue. Only by knowing the problem could she solve it.
But that hateful fellow suddenly stopped talking!!
"Hey, why didn't you continue?”
Asami asked.
"You have to be polite and ask for advice, or else there won't be anything left.”
This guy was really annoying!
"P-Please, point!”
she asked, enunciating each word.
" Ahem, since you're so sincere," he quickly continued when he saw Asami's furious gaze.
" Another problem with your works is that the plots are old-fashioned. Old isn't a problem, and those people are also using old bottles to make new wine. However, the masters have enough experience and knowledge to write works that contain deep understanding and emotions. You don't have any of these. I suggest you write some light novels or something. After you turn 30, you can challenge traditional literature.”
Asami kept nodding her head when she heard that, but she was confused in the end." What is a light novel?”
"Oh, light novels are novels that people can read easily. Don't pay attention to these details.”
Although this guy was very annoying, he was indeed something.
With some of the questions in her heart answered, Asami wasn't as angry as before. She hesitated for a moment before saying," Hey, give me back my paper. I won't hold it against you for what you did just now."”
"Sorry, this is the first work based on me, so I plan to keep it as a souvenir.”
Sagawa Yan smiled frivolously.
I really hate this guy!
Seeing that she couldn't get her things back, Asami Uchida prepared to leave. If she continued to stay here, she might be angered to death.
Sagawa Yan did not stop her. When Asami was far away, he suddenly said," Hey, don't you want to leave a contact number?"”
Hmph hmph, you're still mesmerized by my beauty, but should I say it?
Asami stopped in her tracks, a little hesitant.
"I was hoping to continue criticizing your novel.”
The girl turned around and a gentle breeze blew over, blowing her hair. She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear and smiled.
However, the words that came out of his mouth were not so pleasant to hear.
"Go and find it yourself, Savage Monkey. Goodbye!”
After saying that, he left quickly without looking back.
Sagawa Yan didn't mind." My number is xxxx. Remember it."”
They also turned around and left. A man and a woman left in opposite directions across the lawn. The boy had a smile on his lips, and the girl's eyes were a little embarrassed.
…
"Master, you're so scumbag…"
The system couldn't stand it anymore and took the initiative to speak.
"This isn't trash, this is universal love. System, you don't understand.”
Sagawa Yan retorted in his mind.
He indeed thought so. The transmigration had undoubtedly unlocked his shackles, and the existence of the two systems had gradually allowed him to let go.
Following his heart was his current principle.
The greater the power, the greater the responsibility.
But why couldn't it be that the greater the ability, the stronger the desire?
Ring, ring, ring. His phone rang.
Who was it? It couldn't be Asami, could it? She called so quickly?
Sagawa Yan picked up the phone, and Ishida's voice was heard.
"Sagawa, come back quickly. Your test results are out!”
"Teacher Ishida, what was the result?”
"It's exactly the same as what you wrote in your thesis. Congratulations, you've completed a great conjecture! Through your conjecture, we found two new Mersenne prime numbers!”
nice！
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