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The reason why he only updated seven chapters and eighteen thousand words today and not twenty thousand words was because he was halfway through writing.

He realized that the logical loopholes left behind in the beginning had been magnified here and had seriously affected the development of the plot.

This was the author's first time writing a system novel. In the past, he had always written novels that were from the same era, which led to flaws in the plot and unreasonable design.

I'm very sorry.

Especially the most important logical relationship, which was the relationship between the system, humans, and the world. He had not thought about this at the beginning, but it was only today that this problem had expanded.

He had to stop and think carefully, so he didn't manage to update 20,000.

It turned out that the logical relationship between the system, the protagonist, and the world was too chaotic.

Combined with the suggestions of the readers.

Today, he had spent some time re-figuring out this logical relationship because this logic was very important.

Redesigning the system, the protagonist, and the relationship with the world.

First, the System was still above this world. It possessed powerful technological power that humans could not grasp, but the power of the System was limited, just as the storyline had already introduced.

The things produced by the system were of high quality and good quality, but the production efficiency was low. This gave the host a chance to stand out.

Second, the main character's role in the plot is the main one. I hope to create a character who can control the system, not a person controlled by the system. The quality of the things produced by the system is good, but the efficiency is slow. The technological knowledge given by the system to the main character can be converted to human technology, but the quality is not as good as the system. The advantage is in quantity.

The advantage of this was that it could highlight the role of the main character and the person in the plot. When the technology provided by the system could not be quickly mass-produced, the main character would be the leader who led the purification technology to become widespread.

(Most important) Third, the setting of the world relations came from the phrase "breathing together, sharing destiny" that I suddenly saw on the news today. From the beginning of the plot setting, I had placed too much emphasis on the status of the system. I believed that without the system, purification technology would not be able to be popularized on a large scale.

As a result, the technological knowledge that he had obtained had been useless, and there were some gaps in the plot. Therefore, he thought about it carefully today.

I want to purify the ecosystem! Then what was ecology? The ecosystem is a combination of countless species and is interconnected. If any one of the links is missing, it will collapse. I originally thought that the system was above everything else and that humans should not be able to produce the things produced by the system. In this way, I could rely on the protagonist to build a "purification technology country" that could surpass the entire world.

What was the problem? Find me! Where was the pollution? Find me! The fact that humans and society were treated as non-existent also led to a part of the plot's problems.

Now that I realized this problem, I changed my mind. The system could still be high and mighty, but its ability would be weakened. The protagonist would be able to form his own research team based on the knowledge passed to the protagonist by the system.

Although it is not as powerful as the technology produced by the system, it can be controlled by humans. In front of an ecosystem, no one can be independent. Even if the protagonist I wrote down can change the entire world by himself, using all the technology of the system to build the world into perfection.

But what if the system was gone one day? Or if the protagonist died, what was the use of the perfect world that the protagonist had created? Everything depended on the system, and everything came from the system. Humans and society had no use in it. Then, could the people who came after maintain this world? Weakening the system, putting down the power of science and technology, and emphasizing the power of humans. The system was only a support, although the machines produced were not as good as the system.

However, this was a legacy of purification technology that humans could master. Even if there was no system or protagonist one day, humans could still rely on their own strength.

Together, they would create a harmonious world.

"Therefore, in the later parts of the plot, the main character will definitely build a manufacturing factory that humans can build themselves. There will also be a pure system factory. I hope to make the host more like a leader, a pioneer. The system's things will also play a leading role.

Of course, this was a cool novel. Whether it was the system's things or the artificial factories built by the host, they were all under the control of the protagonist. The protagonist was still the protagonist, and he was the only one in the world. What belonged to the protagonist could never be taken away by others, but the logic of the world was clear and smooth. It had also sublimated.

I have to say that the phrase 'share a breath, share a fate' really gave me a lot of inspiration!

Finally, I would like to thank all my readers for their support! Thank you, big shots!

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