Original God: The Journey of Spoiling His Wife Starting from Ayaka in the God
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Ayaka Kamili had been busy dealing with matters outside during the day and only returned at dusk.

After seeing that Ning Ze had finished writing his novel, his eyes lit up, and the hard work of the day disappeared.

After arriving at the garden and dispersing the servants, Ayaka Shinri sat under the cherry tree and flipped through the first half of " The Years When Little Fox and I Travelled the Continent ".

Just by looking at the beginning, Ayaka Kamili's mind was instantly attracted.

At the beginning of the novel, the protagonist and the little fox were facing the pursuit of the Qiu Qiu tribe. During the escape, they were surrounded by danger, which made people break out in cold sweat for the protagonist.

This was very different from those novels that started slowly. It was quite attractive.

Seeing that Ling Hua was watching seriously and clenching her fists from time to time, Ning Ze smiled knowingly.

Ayaka Kamiri's reaction proved that his novel was not bad. At least he could earn some money back.

After reading for about twenty minutes, Ayaka Kamili flipped to the last page and asked in a daze,"What about the rest of the story?"

"What story?" NingZe slowly brewed a cup of tea for himself.

As a qualified novel writer, using broken chapters to raise the readers 'expectations was one of his specialties.

Otherwise, why would readers want to read the second half after reading the first half? This was a strategy to attract readers.

"It's the following content of the protagonist and the little fox being surrounded by the Beast Realm Wolves.”

"Did they manage to escape the encirclement of the Beast Realm Wolves?”

"Also, when will the protagonist and the little fox's date for the Glass Moon Sea Lantern Festival arrive?”

Aka's angry and excited mood caused her palm-sized face to swell up a little.

It made one want to poke her face gently.

Ning Ze suppressed the ripples in his heart and said with a smile,"The protagonist and the little fox naturally escaped the encirclement of the beast realm wolves. They even saw the golden beast king together.”

"Yes, yes. And then?"

Ling Hua looked at NingZe with anticipation.

"The second half of the story comes after that. There's only the first half here.”

"Have you finished writing the second half?"

"I've written it and it's in the room now.”

"Then can you show it to me now?" Ayaka asked happily.”

As soon as she said that, Ayaka Kamiri realized that she was too excited. She was the eldest daughter of the Kamiri family. She was not an ordinary woman who loved novels.

After a light cough, Ayaka Kamili straightened her posture and her expression returned to normal.

"Your novel is not bad. It should be able to be published by the Bachong Hall. As for whether it will sell well, it will depend on how well you write the second half of the story.”

"Then it should be settled, because I personally feel that the second half is more exciting than the first half."”

"Really?" Ayaka could not suppress the curiosity in her heart.

"Of course, and in the second half, I will gradually reveal the origins and secrets of the little fox.”

"Didn't the protagonist randomly pick up the little fox in the wilderness?”

"Of course not. Without any special background or secrets, how could he become the second protagonist of this book?”

The more NingZe spoke, the more anticipation Ayaka Kamili felt, and the more she could not maintain her calm expression.

She really wanted to go to Ning Ze's room now, find the second half of the novel, and then stay up until dawn.

However, she felt that she couldn't be so casual, and she couldn't show too much desire for this novel. After all, she was the eldest daughter of the Shinri family.

If the person in front of him could tactfully ask him to help review the manuscript, that would be the best.

Ling Hua pretended as if nothing had happened as she sized up NingZe. She secretly revealed that she wanted to see the second half, but NingZe didn't move.

This little thought naturally couldn't be hidden from Ning Ze. He silently drank his tea, pretending that he didn't understand.

Creating a sense of anticipation was a very important part of a novel. Only when the key points were broken would the readers 'hearts itch.

When the climax came, he would add a few more chapters to pave the way for it, raising the readers 'expectations even higher.

When the climax came, the readers would feel a sense of release after a few chapters, and the author would earn a little more money.

Ayaka Shinigami drank a cup of tea and secretly sized up the person in front of her from the corner of her eye. She saw that there seemed to be an inexplicable smile hidden on his handsome face.

Thinking of how he had deliberately been slow just now, she had already seen through his thoughts.

If it weren't for the upbringing she had since she was young, she really wanted to curse the dog author. It was too infuriating.

She really wanted to see the rest of the story.

Although she could imagine it herself, there was an itch in her heart that urged her to quickly read the new story content.

"I've heard that travelers travel to all sorts of dangerous places on the continent. Since you were able to come to Inaba from Mond City, your strength must be extraordinary, right?”

Ayaka Kamili narrowed her eyes as she had an idea.

"It's alright."

NingZe himself wasn't sure what level his strength had reached. With his original strength, the Ice Attribute Divine Eye and the Ice Wheel Pill, he didn't know if he could fight against someone like Ayaka Kamiri.

"Can you show me the strength of a traveler?”Battle intent flowed in Shinri Ayaka's eyes.

She wasn't a warlike person, but she had a little pent-up anger in her heart tonight. If she didn't vent it out, she definitely wouldn't be able to sleep tonight.

"Won't it affect others?" Ning Ze looked around.”

"A few simple spars won't be a problem.”

"Alright then."

Ning Ze agreed to the battle. He also wanted to test his current strength.

Moreover, he had just obtained the Ice Wheel Pill, so he could use the Ayaka of the God to test the power of the Divine Weapon.

Ayaka Kamili pulled away and drew her weapon.

The tachi was pointed far away, and moonlight gathered, adding a bit of frost to the entire weapon.

With the weapon in hand, Ayaka Kamili's aura changed instantly. Her eyes were filled with the coldness and pride of a martial artist.

"Come, take out your weapon."

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