After all, the rise of a minor character had been adapted too much.
Not only was the routine old, but the audience was also tired of it.
It was really hard to get people interested.
Unless Lu Chen's following plot was exceptionally well written.
That was another matter.
So...
At least for now.
Yan Gelin's understanding of this plot development was lower than what he had expected…
And at this moment…
Liu Heping, who had been silent all this while, also spoke up.
"The geographical background is the soil where the plot extends. Different regions produce different stories.
Just like the high slope of the yellow earth, it was destined that the unique grace and poetry of the Jiangnan water village would not appear.
Similarly, in the area where the clan culture was prevalent in Guangdong Province.
Even if it was about the rise of a small character, the story would definitely be different from other places.”
"Yes, Teacher Liu is right!
It would depend on whether Lu Chen could combine the two concepts of personal rise and clan.
If it was just a simple introduction of the geographical environment.
It introduced the unique cultural environment of Guangdong Province.
And if you don't take advantage of that,
It was still based on personal development, causing the background design to be blurred out.
I think Number 48's story will most likely disappoint us.”
Shu Ping continued to throw out his opinion.
Yan Gelin and Chen Sicheng nodded.
Even Liu He Ping nodded slightly, agreeing with Shu Ping's point of view.
After all, everyone had seen Lu Chen's selection of clan culture and ancestral hall culture.
He felt his eyes light up and feel a sense of freshness.
But now that the plot had unfolded, it was obvious that Lu Chen did not make good use of these two keywords for the time being…
Of course!
Speaking of which...
After all, this was only the beginning, and the plot had yet to fully unfold. It was definitely not appropriate to jump to conclusions too early…
However, Lu Chen's opening sentence…
To tell the truth, it was indeed too conventional!
No wonder the judges were disappointed…
………………
And at this moment…
Chen Sicheng was amused as he listened.
He had already said that Number 48's strength was average.
However, Liu Heping looked at the other party in a higher light.
But now, it seemed like he was the only one.
Lu Chen's performance was clearly following his evaluation…
The theme was the same as most of the other contestants. There was nothing new about it, but it was old-fashioned.
He wanted to use this story to advance to the next round.
Let's not talk about daydreaming.
However, the probability of advancement was really not high.
Anyway, Chen Sicheng didn't care what the other three judges thought.
At least to him.
This kind of old-fashioned story would be deducted at least two points!
If the plot was not outstanding, then the deduction would be even more!
Chen Sicheng had always felt that a good story must have absolute commercial value.
Since he had become a judge.
Then don't get involved with this kind of old man!
It was impossible for him to approve of it!
In the live broadcast room.
Listening to the conversation of the judges.
The netizens were also discussing animatedly.
Yes, the teachers were right. The plot was indeed a little slow! I thought it would be about internal strife, but this is it?
Wasn't this story a proper online novel idea? The key was still the old-fashioned online novel idea from ten or twenty years ago. Too outdated!
Number 48 wasn't as strong as Teacher Liu Heping said.
To be honest, when Number 48 wrote the words 'ancestral temple culture' at the beginning, my eyes lit up. He didn't expect it to be so vulgar immediately!
Let's wait and see. Hopefully, Teacher Liu Heping won't slap his own face. If Number 48 didn't advance, then it would be really embarrassing!
It was so awkward!
Look, he's about to start writing again!
On the screen…
After Lu Chen paced back and forth a few times, he walked to the whiteboard again!
He picked up the black pen and wrote:
"Because Lin Yaodong spent most of his time on the streets, he found that collecting waste was very profitable. He earned much more than he did when he set up a stall to make snacks. That era was just the 1990s. The coastal trade was developed, and all kinds of foreign things flooded into the country, including a lot of foreign garbage.
Dongshan City! (A virtual city in Guangdong Province.)
As a port city, it was the first city in China to come into contact with this batch of wind outlets.
After learning about the money-making project, Lin Yaodong immediately decided to start a business selling scrap!
To him, what kind of business could make money? He would do whatever he wanted!
Because he was afraid of being poor!
The poor boy's desire for money was engraved in his bones.
In order to make money, Lin Yaodong thought that he could do anything!”
He wrote to this point.
Lu Chen paused again.
But this time, he quickly picked up his pen and continued writing.
"Because Lin Yaodong was smart and knew how to do things. Soon, he made great achievements in the waste collection industry. In the next few years, he also earned his first bucket of gold by collecting waste.
At that time, he was just in his early twenties. Because he had entered society early and had come into contact with many people, his aura was comparable to that of a person thirty years younger.
It was also because he had earned money.
Lin Yaodong's life changed drastically!
First, his family's conditions were good. He could eat well and live in a house that did not leak.
Secondly, their family's reputation in the village had gradually increased.
The villagers would greet him when they saw him.
This drastic change in the external environment.
He wanted Lin Yaodong to truly feel the charm of money!
His desire for money had also increased explosively during this period of time!
He believed that money could bring him everything!
Therefore!
He desperately hoped that he could earn more money!
Change herself!
Change the family!
It was even to the extent that!
He wanted to change the pagoda stronghold!
Change the fate of your bloodline!"
…………
He saw the last line of words!
Shu Ping's eyes widened slightly!
"He posted a topic with the clan!"
"As expected, it's indeed the way to advance from personal development to leading the development of the village!”
Chen Sicheng pursed his lips.
This plot was not only reasonable but also within expectations.
Yan Gelin also pursed his lips and took a deep breath.
"The character has been established! But…it's still not enough!"
Yan Gelin commented.
Liu Heping continued to watch quietly without saying a word.
"Teacher Saa, I think…we should change rooms. We can't stay in room 48 forever.”
Chen Sicheng suggested.
Saa looked at the time. Indeed, she had stayed in Room 48 for a few minutes.
It was a little long…
"Then let's switch rooms. How many judges?”
Regarding this, Shu Ping and the others naturally had no objections.
As judges, there were so many contestants. They couldn't just look at one person!
Besides, Number 48's story was also a mystery.
To be fair, it was indeed not exciting enough…
At least that was the case for now.
Immediately after.
Little Saka switched to the other livestream rooms, and the judges continued to comment on the other contestants.
…………
Sigh, this story isn't very interesting. I'll go to the other rooms to take a look.
I'm going too.
Everyone can come and take a look at Room 4. It's quite interesting. Room 4 designed a plot similar to a stage play. It's quite fun.
Stage play? A village stage play? Whoa, interesting. I'll go take a look.
I'm going too!
The people in the live broadcast room were like the rising tide. They came and went quickly.
In the blink of an eye, the 300,000 people had fallen by more than half.
In fact, the number of people was still decreasing drastically.
Soon, it fell below 100,000.
…………
At this moment.
Inside the room.
Lu Chen, who knew nothing about the outside world, continued his deduction.
At this point.
Lin Yaodong's mental construction had basically taken shape.
Value!
The concept of money!
Worldview!
It had already been established!
Humans were only obsessed with something and desired it!
Only then would greed breed!
Ambition!
With greed and ambition, one would want more regardless of everything!
It was this mentality and motivation that eventually led Lin Yaodong to transform into a drug lord!
The next step of the plot was very crucial!
It was because of this incident that Lin Yaodong embarked on the path of crime for the first time!
And use this as a turning point and opportunity.
It had an extremely profound impact on him!
From the inside out, he welcomed the first transformation in his life!
It really laid a solid foundation for him to become a big drug lord later!
This turning point was the smuggling of cars!
Although it was not explicitly stated in the original play.
But it was not hard to guess.
As Lin Yaodong's experience increased, he was gradually dissatisfied with the "small profits" of collecting waste!
In the end, they discovered smuggling. It was very profitable!
Therefore, he took the risk and started smuggling.
It also laid an important foreshadowing for his escape to Xiangjiang and his contact with drugs!
So...
The following plot was the real climax of the story!
P.S. It's already midnight today! There were still two chapters before the plot exploded!
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